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In the darkness of the night
I can only hear my footsteps
on the ground
A little wind
makes my hair move
The stars give me
a feeling that
I'm not alone

I spin around in circles
Looking up at the sky
I can't feel my fingers
It's that cold outside
I see snow on the ground
It's peaceful and quiet

I dance around
Laughing for myself
I can't see where I'm going
but it doesn't matter
Because I feel free
No one can see me
No one can judge me
I'm free right now
In this moment

I get all dizzy
and fall to the ground
I'm looking right up
So many stars
Beautiful
I reach for them
and try to touch them
I know I'm too far away
But it's fun to try

A picture of you
comes into my mind
You're so beautiful
in every way
I can't deny it
I love you
But you'll never
be mine
You're the star
I can never reach

I laugh for myself
Why am I doing this
to myself
You can't be mine
But I still want you
more than anything else
All I can say is that
I love you
I can't deny it
I love you
But you'll never
be mine
You're the star
I can never reach
©2007-2009 ~PaltZu
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:iconseaofthoughts:
I've had stars that I couldn't reach....physically, emotionally, mentally. In a way, I'm still reaching. Nice poem.
:icontoxxicdreams:
This is cool! Nice... :heart:

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I'd just like to say heeeeellllloooo for no particular reason except the fact that I'm absolutely raving mad! :crazy:

We're on a bridge, Charlie! :w00t:

"Yes, you are exactly* my brand of heroin." – Edward Cullen, Twilight
:iconpaltzu:
Thank you very much and thnx for the fav ^^

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:heart:Love forever, love is free:heart:
:iconpaltzu:
Thank you ^^

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:heart:Love forever, love is free:heart:
:iconpauletta90:
Ljuuuuuuvliiiiit! :glomp:

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I thought, that the world inside me, was just a feeble attempt to cope with the coldness outside. But then I learned, that what is inside of me, is more real, and powerful, than the world outside.
:iconpaltzu:
Tackar & bockar :glomp: & tack fö favven ^^

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:heart:Love forever, love is free:heart:
:iconnoonie-san:
this is so sweet and lovely!! :love:
you write such great poems!!
wonderful as always, buddy! :glomp:

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:iconmonster242:
very nice :D

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A cookie for you! :cookie: :lol:

btw.my stock account: ~monster242-stock

Nie mylić rysowania z malowaniem. Nie przy mnie xD
:iconpaltzu:
Thank you ^^

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:heart:Love forever, love is free:heart:

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